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mfisherart, January 14th, 2012, 11:10 pm ( Reply )

What a twist!

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doge91 (Guest), January 15th, 2012, 12:22 am ( Reply )

@mfisherart: Waugh!

doge91 (Guest), January 15th, 2012, 12:26 am ( Reply )

I like his reaction when she starts going for the coins, but before she starts eating them. Even though he's a great guy with no lock-picking skill, he's still a thief; that reaction seems very (if stereotypically) natural for him. And beyond that, he's obviously got a lot invested in her (so to speak), and his hurt and indignation at that kind of betrayal is very honest.

mfisherart, January 15th, 2012, 4:20 pm ( Reply )

@doge91: And it even ties into the title or something! It's all theme-y! Yay!

Yeah. Also, thank you. You're really sensitive to these things, and it means a lot that you caught that. Like, I'm on the right track with these characters!

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